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Sometimes I wonder: what am I?
I look at the stars and feel very small;
just a tiny consciousness.
But if I were as tall as a planet,
I would still be short in comparison to the universe.

I see a person twice my size
and I feel weak and fragile.
But if I were strong and powerful,
I would still not be invincible.

I see a painting by the hand of a genius,
and I feel inexperienced and ignorant.
But if I were the greatest artist alive,
it would not make me love what I do any more or less.

I see blood, running from the wound of another,
and I feel a chilling fear from deep within.
But if I walked this earth with bravery,
it would not make things less dangerous.

I see a baby, innocent and naive,
and I feel cynical and jaded.
But if I saw through untainted eyes all my life,
it would not make the world a better place.

I see a raindrop, tear of the sky,
and I feel ugly and unsightly.
But if I were as beautiful as rain,
it would not make me crystal clear inside.

There are children with cancer,
mothers who lose their babies,
people who are worse off than dead.

I wonder if I am just lucky or if the world was cruel.
But even if the world was kind or if I were dying, too,
there would still be suffering.

I weep all night, I get nightmares,
I lose myself thinking of such things.
But even if I could right every wrong,
if I could run faster
or jump higher
or be stronger,
it would not make me better or happier.

With what I have, I'll do what I like
and like what I do.
Life is good.
©2009-2010 =ItaLuv
:iconitaluv:

Author's Comments

"Do what you like, and like what you do. Life is Good."

When I was a kid, I bought a hat with this stitched on the inside, and ever since then I guess you could call it my creed. :D

This is something I wrote ages ago and found again today. I dunno...I guess it turned out okay.

My teacher wrote "Very Powerful Piece" on the paper, but she was kind of...ditzy (nice, but ditzy). So I didn't know whether to trust her judgment or not. xD;;

[EDIT] ಠ_ಠ WHY is this thing on the front page? Obviously there is some horrible mistake here.

Oh...and thanks, I guess. [/EDIT]

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:iconrangerer:
Well, it deserves much more than an usual comment, so I will say briefly. This is really something, something great. And I hope I know what I mean.

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:iconkamikaze-kaito:
This is... wow. I usually don't read poetry, but this caught my eye... You did great there. Even though it's written in quite a simple, "sober" style, there's so much emotion to it... at least, I felt my heart pounding wildly while reading this. Also, the ending is quite... unexpected, but great. It's a great way to see and live one's life. This deserves more than a comment like "A very powerful piece!" ! This deserves a fav at least, and people should think about it. It would help so many.

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:iconbubbles-gal119:
This is sad yet beautiful.

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"I know every bomb has a silver lining." ("Fine" by Lemon Demon)
:icon9tailedwolf:
wow......
that was amazing

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Get away from all we know
Come on, follow
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:iconrandomness123:
life is wonderful. :>

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:iconredlotusblade:
I agree.

I agree very much with what you say and I'll tip my hat to that creed of yours.

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-"You see, I know that you know that I know that he knows that she knew that I know what you know. "
"What!?"
"Exactly."

"It's as if I knew what I was talking about!"
:iconthemidnightwalker:
I have so much to say about this, but I'm afraid it wouldn't fit; I'll say this instead.

amazing with so much meaning.

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If it can't get any darker, make it lighter.
:iconthatrealycoolguy:
deeeeeep

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you're not really cool unless you're realycool
:iconuchihasakura1989:
wow just wow! i love this, you are a great writer!

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:iconakatsuki2305:
I'm not much of a poetry person but.. damn, this is great. I.. really don't know what to say. ;A; Words cannot describe how this is.. inspiring(?)

You prove a good point. The world isn't perfect, and at times, completely and utterly cruel. ;A; I'm not the best critique out there, but I must say, your teacher was right when she put "Very Powerful Piece" on the paper. ;w; It's just simply lovely and inspiring, Ita~


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